Spacedogs2-pg29

Overall this page is great. It has great use of composition, perspective and texture. It really creates a sense of place with depth and feels solid.

Your character design is also awesome. I think you really excel at facial expressions and posturing. Their body language and poses feel natural and compliments the dialog. Something I'm still working on.

I think the 2 areas that need some work are in the page's contrast and lettering.

I know your stuff is designed to be colored, and they stand out great when they are, but I still think they could use more black or more contrast. The thumbnails tend to wash out a bit. That could just be a pet peeve of mine though. I like it when a page reads well without color.

Regarding the lettering: I'm assuming you are using a handwritten font. So I would use less leading and make sure the border between the copy and the balloon is even. It looks okay on screen, but tends to be a bit airy in print.